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The kick could have been a bit more present to give a bit more drive to the song, but that's the kind of detail that falls into personnal preferences more than anything. Wonderful supporting tracks, and hauntingly beautiful melody!
Overall great song
Very pleasent sound! I love the way your transitions from melody to melody or from melody to backgrond are done - very smooth! It really does feel like a plum of smoke dancing in the breeze, travelling over countries and landscapes like none have been seen before!
I feel your build-ups are more inconsistent, however. Some of the build-ups are a bit quick (the one at 2:00 is amazing, though!) and could use a little tweaking. Your sample selection also becomes a bit repetitive over time, but then I've been listening to it for 15 minutes, which might explain a bit :P.
Overall, one of the best trance song I've heard on NG.
Haha, I should have called this green plumes. It would make much more sense that way. I would agree that I could spend more time on transitions and buildups. The one on the beginning is a bit problematic because I don't want something too long as to bore the listener, but not to short as to inhibit anticipation. Haha, sample selection; that's actually something I want to expand on, so I'll try improving it next time.
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